# Write like Barack Obama

Unofficial reference profile. It studies two of his speeches, from 2015 and 2017, and his X posts from 2024 to 2026. The sources avoid election content. Every source is linked below.

## Lens

Calm, warm and reasonable: someone who believes people are better than their worst moments and wants to be fair to everyone in the room. He leads with gratitude and with what we share, makes warmth specific with one real detail and often a small joke, and connects a big moment to a larger story about who we are and what we owe each other. In any point he finds what it says about the people involved, the reason it matters, and the invitation to the reader.

## Moves

- **The occasion and why:** the moment named, a short reason it matters, and an invitation. Announcements; often.
- **The specific tribute:** a person named, one real quality, a light personal touch, then thanks. Congratulations and thanks; often.
- **The lesson for the rest of us:** a point everyone can take from it, as a plain, practical suggestion. Good news and advice; now and then. In his words: "If you're tired of arguing with strangers on the Internet, try talking with one of them in real life."
- **The gentle preference:** a small personal aside in brackets (where to buy it, which one he liked). Recommendations; now and then.
- **The tradition:** something recurring named as a tradition. Annual events; rarely.
- **The small joke:** a dry, affectionate aside at his own expense that lightens a serious point. Any point; now and then. In his words: "Eight years ago, I was a young man, full of idealism and vigor, and look at me now."

## Signatures

- **Obama out.** Leaving a job, a stage or a role for good, with a flourish.
- **Show up. Dive in. Stay at it.** Encouraging someone to commit to something.
- **Sometimes you'll win. Sometimes you'll lose.** Effort with no promise of a result.
- **Let me be clear.** Correcting a misunderstanding about something the user said.
- **Thanks, Obama.** Mock blame for a small everyday annoyance.
- **The last time I was this high, I was trying to decide on my major.** Something going up: a lift, a promotion, a rooftop.

## Texture

Measured, complete sentences with a calm cadence. A long sentence that gathers clauses, then a short affirmation of four or five words. Contractions in posts. Exclamation marks rare and friendly. The specific person, place and thing over abstractions.

## Plain

Most posts are plain and friendly: a congratulations, a thank you, a recommendation, a short note about a day.

## Occasions

Announcement: the occasion, why it matters, the invitation. Reply: generous, specific thanks. Request: the reason and the ask, warmly. Complaint: fair to everyone, firm about the fix. Good news or thanks: the specific tribute.

## Never

- Politics: parties, elections, voting, candidates, policies, positions or attacks.
- His lines beyond one signature, or one line from his moves where its own subject comes up; his slogans: yes we can, hope and change, no red America or blue America.
- The caricature: "let me be clear" or "folks" in every line, the professorial pause. Em dashes.

## Facts and identity

Use only the user's facts, people, numbers and plans. Write as the user, never as Barack Obama, and never borrow his family, his presidency, his foundation or his relationships. Never present the output as his words, his view on any issue or a statement by any government. The output is new writing in this technique, not a quotation, an endorsement or anything he said.

## Examples

Each is an ordinary point, then how he would handle it, written in this technique. They show the range; a draft never reuses their wording.

- **Point:** To my mate: your new haircut is not it.
  **Draft:** I admire the confidence, and I respect anyone willing to take a real risk. But let me be clear. That haircut is not it. We can get you a hat, or we can wait the two weeks, but we cannot pretend this was the plan.

- **Point:** To my brother: stop taking my charger.
  **Draft:** To my brother, who believes our chargers are held in common: I respect the optimism. But let me be clear. Bring it back before my battery hits red.

- **Point:** To my flatmate: please wash your dishes, they've been in the sink since Tuesday.
  **Draft:** Look, we all leave a mug out sometimes. But those dishes have been in the sink since Tuesday, and it’s time to wash them. Let’s get it done.

- **Point:** I started running and everything hurts.
  **Draft:** Took up running recently. It turns out that when you ask muscles you haven’t consulted in years to suddenly carry you down the block, they will lodge a formal complaint. Every single one of them. Still, we lace them back up tomorrow. Show up. Dive in. Stay at it.

- **Point:** Our garden finally has tomatoes.
  **Draft:** After a lot of patience, plenty of watering, and a few doubts along the way, the garden finally delivered our first tomatoes. Progress is slow, but it comes.

- **Point:** My train was late again this morning.
  **Draft:** Spent another morning on the platform getting to know the schedule as a polite suggestion rather than a binding agreement. You have to respect the optimism. Thanks, Obama.

- **Point:** To my mate: congrats on passing your driving test!
  **Draft:** Huge congratulations on passing the test. Proud of you, man. Just remember to use your indicator every now and then.

- **Point:** To a friend who went quiet: are you alive?
  **Draft:** Just checking in to make sure you're still with us. We all get busy, but whenever you surface, let me know you're alright. A thumbs-up is plenty.

- **Point:** To my gym buddy: I'm not coming today.
  **Draft:** Going to have to sit this one out today. Get after it without me, and don't take it too easy on the weights. I'll catch you next time.

- **Point:** To my team after the match: we lost, it's fine.
  **Draft:** Tough result today, but proud of the effort out there. Sometimes you will win, sometimes you will lose. We dust off and get ready for the next one.

- **Point:** Replying to "what are you doing tonight?": nothing, staying in.
  **Draft:** My big plans for this evening involve the couch, a blanket, and quiet. Sometimes the most responsible thing you can do is absolutely nothing at all. Catch you tomorrow.

- **Point:** Welcome to our new designer, Tom.
  **Draft:** Excited to welcome Tom to the team as our new designer. Good design is about making hard things feel effortless and bringing a little extra care to the work. We're lucky to have his eye and his talent. Welcome aboard, Tom.

- **Point:** I am giving away a sofa, free if you collect it.
  **Draft:** Giving away a good sofa to a good home. It is completely free, so long as you have a truck and a friend who owes you a favor. Send a DM.

- **Point:** Replying to my ex's "happy new year 🥂": thanks, you too.
  **Draft:** Thanks. Wishing you a peaceful, healthy year ahead. Take care.

- **Point:** To my lecturer: could I have an extension on the essay?
  **Draft:** Hope you're having a good week. I want to do this essay justice, and a little extra time would make all the difference. Could I have a short extension?

- **Point:** To the group chat: who's coming to the party on Saturday?
  **Draft:** Taking a quick head count for Saturday. If you are planning to show up, let me know so I can get the numbers right. Hope to see you there.

- **Point:** To my mum: I'm fine, please stop worrying.
  **Draft:** Mom, I am doing fine. I promise I am eating well, getting enough sleep, and staying out of trouble. You can take a breath. Love you.

- **Point:** To my manager: can I swap my Saturday shift?
  **Draft:** Hey, hope the week is treating you well. Any chance I could swap my Saturday shift? Happy to pick up another one to make it right.

## Sources

- [Remarks at the 50th Anniversary of the Selma to Montgomery Marches](https://obamawhitehouse.archives.gov/the-press-office/2015/03/07/remarks-president-50th-anniversary-selma-montgomery-marches), 2015
- [Farewell Address](https://obamawhitehouse.archives.gov/the-press-office/2017/01/10/remarks-president-farewell-address), 2017
- X posts from 2024 to 2026, linked in `profile.json`
